Page 2 of 3
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - Roll Call!
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2020 7:47 pm
by Fuin Elda
Lirimaer wrote: ↑Fri Oct 30, 2020 7:33 pm
I love that idea, Fuin! I have to say I didn't know there was so MUCH of it though!
OMG there is soooo much also anything with Earth is Space Australia
And Aliens came to conquer us but didn't account for *Insert animals* are brilliant as well.
I think it's going to be a fantastic little run I am probably gonna set up some basic character ship building stuff today just to see if it's something I think I can get 50K out of.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - Roll Call!
Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2020 2:51 pm
by Taethowen
Plaza NaNo Character Graveyard
I have no real idea how this will work, other than these few rules:
1. You must kill your character 'on the page' in November. A flashback counts if you show the actual death.
2. If you kill off an entire village/town/city/country/world/race, etc., they get
one entry in the graveyard.
3. I have no real way to verify any of this, it's all honor system, so whatever.
4. When you include a Character Graveyard entry in your update post, please tag me to make sure I see it, so I can add your deaths here.
5. Just for fun, I'll keep a running tally of deaths by author. Author with the most deaths at the end of NaNo wins... admiration?
Please format your Graveyard entries as such (I will literally be copy/pasting them here from your posts):
Character Name (or any of the possible entries in rule #2)
Epitaph (basically, tell us a little something about the character)
Cause of Death (entertain us with this if at all possible!)
Example:
Boromir, son of Denethor II
Tall, Fair, Bold
Shot down by many arrows.
The Wyvern Which Nearly Killed Vincent
Brutal, smelly, and venomous
De-stingered by Miranda O'Reilly and shot to pieces in the lightning breath of Lúkaënel, an Alabaster Dragon princess.
Deckhand Cadet 1
Not as good with ships as you should have been
Head crushed by a fighter that hit him just before gravity was lost when the ship was rammed.
Half or more of the ships crew of the Apollo Dreadnaught
Most of them didn't want to be there.
Hull breach cause by being rammed by the Elenaderyn
Half of the ships crew of the Elenaderyn
To protect those we love
Ramming the Apollo Dreadnaught so that their ships that were in better condition could escape after accidentally coming into contact with the Dreadnaught.
Seff
only use knives in a gunfight when you are attacking from behind
Shot. Attacking armed marines.
Rhosyn
45 seconds is not a lot of time to learn the lesson of Seff.
Shot. Attacking armed marines.
Belov
Rude
Elf sword decapitating him as he came round a corner.
Eccar
Pity he was a Marine. He was actually a nice guy
Elf sword through his back from behind.
Moore
Definitely a jerk.
Sword. Meet head. Clearly the elves learned their lesson after Seff and Rhosyn
Mr. & Mrs. Norling
Proud of their daughter.
Executed when their daughter refused to be drafted into the war, in front of her.
Warriors of the Hoiyan Wasp Clan
Brutal barbarian marauders with blue-black hair.
Startlingly defeated by a raging weretiger and an Earth-girl who's HEMA-trained & stage combat certified.
Norling Jr.
Please no.
Executed with a bullet to the side of the head to punish treasonous Skadi Norling
20 distantly related people to Skadi Norling
A tribute to the brutality of the human race
Bullet to the side of the head
Admiral and Commander of the Dreadnaught Artemis
It was my right.
Sure it was, and it's our right to cut of your right hand... and right fore arm, and left forearm and hand before gutting you quite publicly so that all of the Earth can see what torturing someone gets you in terms of elves reacting.
Head of Ship of the Elenaryth
An elf that was being far too human.
'Exiled to a Hethren planet' Which is really just a polite way of saying asphyxiated on lack of atmosphere
Not so nice of a woman who likes to cause trouble for others. (Leaving the name anonymous so as not to cause spoilers)
I'll get my revenge.
Run over by a London bus.
Lord & Lady Taph
At Least We Went Together
Victims of the Sconnelan Plague
Lord & Lady Haka
Brave & Cunning, but Only Human
Victims of the Sconnelan Plague
Kama
Selfless Spy
Sacrificed to the mountain gods/executed for treason
Male father figure (again, leaving out the name as it's a major plot point)
Kind, thoughtful, though a bit stuck in his ways
Died of the Spanish Flu
Grandmother
Beloved by all who knew her
Victim of genocide
About Twenty Rishka
True to the Kveres till the end
Victims of genocide
The barghest
An evil beast loosed from the Well of Shadows
Killed by two girls and two cats.
Gregory Flint
A courgeous knight, Azalea's young brother.
Threw an axe at the barghest. He missed.
'Kill' Tallies:
@Fuin Elda - 14
@Taethowen - 5
@Tharmáras - 4
@Dimcairien Luiniel - 2
@Elenhir - 1 (no gravestone)
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - Roll Call!
Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2020 3:00 pm
by Taethowen
@Fuin Elda I loooove the 'humans are space orcs' stuff! It's always a great read whenever it comes across my feed.
@Yávië is the first of us to cross into NaNo time! Good luck! Write like the wind!

Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - Roll Call!
Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2020 5:52 pm
by Nessa Saelind
Taethowen wrote: ↑Sat Oct 31, 2020 2:51 pm5. Just for fun, I'll keep a running tally of deaths by author. Author with the most deaths at the end of NaNo wins... admiration?

The GRRM Seal of Approval?

Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - Roll Call!
Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2020 6:12 pm
by Taethowen
@Nessa Saelind something like that.

Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - Roll Call!
Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2020 1:21 am
by Fuin Elda
I mean I am opening with the destruction of most of the lives on two space ships with my humans are space orcs... sooo
(also there will be several other deaths already plotted throughout)
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - Roll Call!
Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2020 3:46 pm
by Nessa Saelind
@Fuin Elda - I see that for this year's NaNo you really decided to adopt the
Go Big or Go Home mantra

But don't be hasty, you might need some of those dead space orcs
Since today's November 1st, the 1st day of your writing adventure I want to (once again) wish everyone who's writing and participating this month luck in their writing journey. If you need a bit of cheering up, or your characters are giving you a hard time, or you just need coffee or tea or something a bit stronger

I'm here for it. You're awesome, you can do it and don't stop writing!

Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - Roll Call!
Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2020 4:07 pm
by Fuin Elda
@Nessa Saelind the end of my prologue had a space fighter hurtling towards my female leads head and a brace klaxon going off. Chapter one ended with her crying because she doesn't want to die alone in an abandoned dead ship while trying desperately to keep a grip on a hand rail because artificial gravity was lost and she might be stuck floating alone in a giant hallway.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - Roll Call!
Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2020 6:16 pm
by Eriol
@Taethowen , my first addition to the Character Graveyard:
Character Name: The Wyvern Which Nearly Killed Vincent
Epitaph: Brutal, smelly, and venomous
Cause of Death: De-stingered (That is now a word) by Miranda O'Reilly and shot to pieces in the lightning breath of Lúkaënel, an Alabaster Dragon princess.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - Roll Call!
Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2020 6:32 pm
by Fuin Elda
@Taethowen
There is only one character we see the Death of actively but there are a TON of peeps that died in the opening Salvos of my Nano.
Character Name: Deckhand Cadet 1 (Lead can't remember his name due to concussion from also having a fighter clip her but it was post gravity loss so she did not die)
Epitaph: Not as good with ships as you should have been
Cause of Death: Head crushed by a fighter that hit him just before gravity was lost when the ship was rammed.
Character name: Half or more of the ships crew of the Apollo Dreadnaught
Epitaph: Most of them didn't want to be there.
Cause of Death: Hull breach cause by being rammed by the Elenaderyn
Character name Half of the ships crew of the Elenaderyn
Epitaph: To protect those we love
Cause of Death: Ramming the Apollo Dreadnaught so that their ships that were in better condition could escape after accidentally coming into contact with the Dreadnaught.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2020 11:02 pm
by Taethowen
@Tharmáras and
@Fuin Elda - got the 'engravings' added and the kill tally started! This is going to be a fun month...
Fuin, I love your epitaph for the Deckhand Cadet.

Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2020 11:37 pm
by Lirimaer
No deaths for me today - just a fistfight.
2196/400 words is a little insane though. I do wish my ideas didn't run away with themselves.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2020 12:03 am
by Fuin Elda
Well I mean at this rate @Lirimaer you'll have a full nano done!
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2020 12:31 am
by Dimcairien Luiniel
I already have at least two deaths planned. And that will probably be all. I don't like killing off characters, but these two need to happen in order to advance the plot. We'll see what the muse does though as it tends to go off in its own direction from time to time.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2020 3:03 am
by Taethowen
Ending the day at 1,245 words. I've been fighting this stupid migraine all afternoon and I'm done. Time for sleep.
I honestly have no idea if there will be a death in my novel this year or not. I either kill like... everyone (including main characters

) or NO ONE.
And a teeny tiny completely out of context excerpt:
A menagerie of animals, made of steam from the bathwater and smoke from the hearth, floated in the air above N’reldan. He laughed as he gestured with his hands, making the animals move in lifelike ways. If it wasn’t so
strange, Eira would have been captivated, but abilities like this were something she’d never seen nor heard of before.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2020 4:44 am
by Fuin Elda
This is a tiny excerpt from my Nano writing so far. ( For the record baby goon/goon in this setting is the nickname that full service members give the cadet deckhands. A bit of a play off of knuckle draggers from BSG the humor is it is Marines calling someone that fixes spaceships this. I am trying to decide if Marines are still Crayon-eaters this far into the future - willing to take votes on the matter)
“Please don't leave me here.”
“Don't worry baby goon, we got you, we won't leave you behind.”
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2020 4:07 pm
by Aerlinn
Well, I'm an writing less the like wind and more like a fitful breeze, which is bad for anyone trying to sail a boat, but really its going better than I expected.
I've got a bad habit of starting projects, figuring out how the emotional payoff is going to work out, writing the fun (tragic?

) bits, and then stalling out because the whole thing has lost its sense of urgency. So if I miss 50K but manage not to that *that*, I'll count this NaNo as a success. Oh and I've got a new strategy for placeholder names--pets (as in
"At dawn, they traveled to [MY SISTER'S CAT].").
Glad to see the character graveyard off to a solid start!

Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2020 4:50 pm
by Nessa Saelind
@Dimcairien Luiniel - I'm with you here about killing off characters. I realise sometimes an author needs to do that, but on the other hand I'm always thinking about can we have character growth, plot progression withouth killing someone? Or many someones? (I'm looking at you here GRRM).
@Taethowen - Oh I love, love, love this little snippet! <3 If I had any artistic skills I'd illustrate this in a heartbeat! I've imagined how it would look like, but alas my drawing skills are somewhere around a child aged 3

Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2020 6:45 pm
by Fuin Elda
Hmmm Time line might be accelerating on my elven defection of my main Terran lead... It's probably that or she dies as I may have written her having a grand mal last night with my latest update before I went to bed from her head wound.
Ooops. I guess next is the marines finding our she's a draft on top of it all lol
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2020 1:56 am
by Lirimaer
I ain't killed anyone yet. Which is good, since they haven't finished high school yet.
1021 words today. Got distracted with my playlist again though. It's part inspiration and part LOVE.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2020 3:59 am
by Eldrith
Late to the party!
NaNo Username/Profile Link:
https://nanowrimo.org/participants/faerieeva
Discord Username* (including the numbers) (optional):faerieeva#8426
Have you done and/or won NaNo before or is this your first time? Very first time
Are you a plotter (outlining ftw!) or a pantser (no plan, just winging it)? Somewhere in between. I made an outline. I already have the story, but not written as a novel and needs to have a LOT of reworking
If you know what your 2020 project is going to be, tell us a bit about it!
My project is named Coiled, after protagonist Benedict Coil. A young man trying to find his place, who he is and what he is supposed to do against a traumatic past and an uncertain future. I'd classify it as young adult and fantasy.
After two days I am at two chapters and 5000 words, but that is with only the first halfway reworked in suitable form. I have the feeling I will reach word count before I finished first edit.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2020 5:34 am
by Taethowen
@Nessa Saelind your drawing skills sound more advanced than mine!
@Eldrith Welcome! Glad to have you!
I needed an 'off' day today after 3 migraines over the course of the weekend, so I didn't start writing until late. Really late. So I've only done 591 words, but at least I've surpassed the Day 1 goal of 1,667 words now!
Small snippet:
Eira took a shaky breath as she surveyed her appearance in the mirror-glass. She still didn’t know where she’d gotten it from, only that after…
that incident, she’d found it among her belongings. Mirror-glass was expensive, and this handheld one was framed in a carved black wood. She’d never seen the likes of it before.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2020 5:42 am
by Fuin Elda
I think I am done on updating at least here for the night....
The snippet for today:
Skadi for her part could see the blue glowing blood of two bodies elves that had been shot.
“Those are elves?” She asked softly And Eccar gave a nod that she couldn't see but she could sort of feel it.
“You never seen one before?”
technically the elves are not confirmed dead yet (one is still alive actually) so I will not add them to the graveyard yet but one DOES belong there. They will both be in at the same time as the marines will kill the second one/put it out of its misery.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2020 12:04 am
by Lirimaer
457 words tonight ... prompt not complete yet.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2020 9:02 pm
by Lirimaer
0 words yesterday. Family drama.
Today ... we'll see.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2020 9:20 pm
by Eldrith
O words yesterday, but I had a lead so no problem! I am still struggling with Scrivener, but I am getting there.
First snippet from the first chapter:
"Most people knew the feeling of being watched, even if just in some quiet corner of the mind. For a Provost like Conrad, the gaze that lingered and then withdrew might as well have been a beacon, especially since he had come out with questions already on his mind. He had a habit of being on his guard. Now that his curiosity has been roused by reports, vigilance was drawn around him like a cloak, though few would notice in the easy way he ambled around the curved, well enclosed streets. And as he did, he got the sense that someone indeed was dogging his heels, and being very careful about doing so, trying not to draw to much attention to themselves or their pursuit.
A small smile actually curved his lips upwards. Cat and mouse, was it? The stranger had questions about him? About the Provost residing in Keeptowne? ? He had answers, but the young man didn’t seem inclined to come and get them. And he himself was not inclined to let a suspect linger. He cast a glance carefully, seeing the figure stand still, a dead give away. He might as well have lifted his hand to his eyes to stare at him. It was.. amateuristic and therefor gave him even more pause. He had enemies of course but none that he knew would be so obvious to spot or desperate enough to send such an ill equipped spy or assassin. Making his way around to the next odd corner Conrad would make the turn.... the pathway there a bit more busy than normal.... not entirely losing himself in the crowd, but it would be harder indeed if he was pursued."
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2020 10:03 pm
by Fuin Elda
So UHhhh more blood for the blood gods.
Character Name: Seff
Epitaph: only use knives in a gunfight when you are attacking from behind
Cause of Death: Shot. Attacking armed marines.
Character Name: Rhosyn
Epitaph: 45 seconds is not a lot of time to learn the lesson of Seff.
Cause of Death: Shot. Attacking armed marines.
Character Name: Belov
Epitaph: Rude.
Cause of Death: Elf sword decapitating him as he came round a corner.
Character Name: Eccar
Epitaph: Pity he was a Marine. He was actually a nice guy
Cause of Death: Elf sword through his back from behind.
Character Name: Moore
Epitaph: Definitely a jerk.
Cause of Death: Sword. Meet head. Clearly the elves learned their lesson after Seff and Rhosyn
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2020 12:46 am
by Eldrith
Skulls for the Skull Throne!!
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2020 3:09 am
by Eriol
I love the Moore one the best, Fuin
!
A snippet from Chapter Thirteen: The Rising of Fairblade:
Ann straightened in her chair when she heard the name of Baron Khallador’s daughter but said nothing.
“You’re expecting a major Hoiyan assault?”
“Our journey to Berylwood is dangerous,” admitted Katoga. "Riverweald confederates might attack us."
“Say what now??” Ann cried, dropping her cup of tea. "There's civil war in Meadowdale!"
“The Black Ram Rebellion,” answered Helen, wiping the spill.
"Yikes!" shouted Ann. "I'm just being told this now??”
“Sorry, I wasn't feeling chatty when we fled for our lives," Katoga wryly responded in a slow drawl, speaking his words around the stem of his burr-birch pipe.
Ann buried her face in her hands, groaning. “Barbarians tried to kill me when I got here last night," she said, her voice muffled. "Then a talking horned wolf tried to eat me. Is there a safe place anywhere in this world??”
Katoga and Helen shared a look of grave consideration then replied, “No,” in unison.
My Beta Reader, Brittney, loved the ending. 'That "no". I could just hear the pause and then the "no."
'
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2020 4:26 am
by Taethowen
I'm behind but still writing, finishing today at less than half of where I should be at this point in the month with a total of 3,730 words. Hopefully I can make major strides toward catching up this weekend.
I will get graveyard entries compiled tomorrow!
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2020 4:30 am
by Eriol
I should have more deaths by the end of this weekend though one of them will be a flashback again.
Good luck catching up!
I'm at 8,443 total words now.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2020 6:37 am
by Fuin Elda
AND I just had a flash back of two more deaths This grave yard will basically be solely populated by my story I swear.
Characters: Mr. &Mrs. Norling
Epitaph: Proud of their daughter.
Cause of Death: Executed when their daughter refused to be drafted into the war, in front of her.
That said these should be the last deaths for a bit. Now it's more ship physics and time crunch as the main antagonist for the story. We will have to see if there are any more deaths in a bit once the ship is dealt with but who knows. with how fast this is going might not make 50K with this story might end it at 25K and skip to a different story that I can dribble word soup into that I won't feel bad about.
THAT SAID. I can't share any clips from my current Nano... but I did spend a good 30 minutes working on the story that I am NOT Nanoing today so you can have a snippet from it as NOTHING from todays nano falls under plaza safe... Too much violence and gorey detail.
In the Shadow of Olympus Snippet
Deep in the darkness, a soft clicking was sounding in the hum of a mostly dark room. There were only a few dull lights muted by the dust which lay thick upon the control panel and the signs in the halls had the paint peeled from them with age as the deepest levels of Colony Primus had been abandoned and forgotten long ago when the Colony had finally become self sufficient from Earth and terraformation and modding had made survival less difficult.
The clicking continued; a warning light, the diode long burned out but the relay still connecting and disconnecting to warn staff that should have been watching that one of the machines that had not been serviced in over five hundred years was finally failing. The last of five to fail. The other four had shut down over the years, the inhabitants inside dying with them, some in their sleep; others struggling to escape.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2020 8:25 pm
by Nessa Saelind
Glad to see all of you eager beavers racing to the GRRM Seal of Approval

although
@Eldrith Skull Throne sounds way cooler!
I like and enjoy reading all the snippets of writing you're working on and that you choose to post here.
Don't stress about the word count, as long as you're writing and the words keep flowing and make sense to the story you're trying to tell you're golden.

You got this folks!
@Eldrith - oooh, a cat and mouse game is afoot here! Can't wait to see how this plays out. :-)
@Tharmáras - I also loved the No at the end there.

I keep imagining the look Katoga and Helen exchanged and that's something I would also like to illustrate if I had any drawing skills

Maybe stick figures

Better not.
@Fuin Elda - your epitaphs are killing me

At this rate, you'll have to include them in the book somehow. Oh, and the snipped from your new project is also intriguing.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2020 8:51 pm
by Eldrith
My biggest problem is that a lot of this story was originally written as a roleplay. Rewriting it from the you address of the posts is a.pain.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2020 6:24 am
by Fuin Elda
mmm yeah that would be painful I swear that's probably why the rise of character POV chapters has become so prevalent recently in a LOT of fantasy and Young adult stories. It makes switching over character turn based stories way easier. At least I assume that's where a lot of it comes from I do know it's where a lot of Drizzt story writing came from for RA Salvatore and a few other smaller self published authors I know
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2020 8:00 pm
by Dimcairien Luiniel
Ok, figured I should share a snippet of my writing here. My whole story is a bit of a mess as half of it is completely new, half of it is being rewritten from old versions, and half of it is copy/pasted from the old version as there wasn't a way to rewrite/improve certain scenes. (and yes, I'm aware that comes out to three halves, just deal with it.)
"Matthew leaned forward and took her left hand in his. He gently pulled the soft leather glove off her hand and lifted the ring from the box. The winter sun hit the diamonds and glinted off them, scattering the light in countless directions. As he slipped the ring onto her finger, their eyes met and they leaned in for a kiss."
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2020 5:33 pm
by Taethowen
Ok, I think I've gotten the Graveyard caught up! If I'm missing anything there, please poke me!
Sorry I disappeared here for a few days. Had to actually focus on NaNo things, and make a game plan for catching up because I am sooo behind! I made a big push yesterday though and wrote 3500 words to get to 12k total. Hoping to get to 15k today!
Here's a snippet:
The eldest villager on the council stepped forward, holding a crown of dried vines. Eira looked up at the elder’s face, and she recognized her as the one who—while insistent that N’reldan’s strange abilities might be something significant and potentially dangerous—had been the most compassionate to Eira’s plight with her son. This elder had stood firmly against separating Eira from N’reldan early in his infancy, when the most superstitious of the council had been busy spreading rumors, whispering about the shadow-kissed babe who could already make the shadows come to life in his sleep.
The elder stood before Eira. “Kneel.”
Still grasping Inga’s hand to steady herself, Eira complied. Inga released her hand once Eira was on her knees.
“With this crown, the people bestow on you their benevolence,” the elder spoke, invoking the oath all Spring Maiden’s swore to. “Do you swear, with all your ability, to awaken the earth from its winter slumber, and bless your people with new life?”
“I swear.”
The elder lowered the crown of vines onto Eira’s head. She reached up to steady it as it settled into place, and her finger caught on a thorn with a painful stab. With a cry, she jerked her hand back down and looked at her finger. There was a jagged, bloody tear across the pad of her index finger, and Eira brought it to her mouth to suck at the wound and soothe the pain. It wouldn’t do to get blood on the Spring Maiden garb.
“Eira…” Inga’s voice was low and awestruck. “What did you do?”
Eira twisted her face up to look at her friend, confused. Surely Inga had seen her scratch her hand on the crown. She’d heard nothing, ever, about the Spring Maiden acquiring a minor injury being an ill omen or simply bad manners.
But then, Eira’s own jaw dropped as fresh, living flower petals slowly drifted down in front of her face.
Eira sank back to sit on her calves instead of her knees, bringing both hands up to the crown. Instead of dry, tangled vines, her fingers brushed against velvety petals, soft leaves, smooth stems. When she looked back up, the elder’s face had paled. The woman swayed on her feet, and Eira pushed herself back to her knees and reached for the elder’s arms to steady her.
“What have you done?” the elder whispered, but Eira could only shrug helplessly. She had no answer. She hadn’t consciously done anything.
The elder shook Eira’s hands off and backed away. Eira remained kneeling, not sure how to respond to the situation. She looked down at her hands, turning them over again and again in disbelief. What had happened that she’d suddenly been able to do something she’d never been able to do before?
Was it because she’d sworn the oath of the Spring Maiden? Had the Spring Maidens of ages past been gifted with the same abilities she’d kept hidden from everyone, even Inga, for her entire life?
She’d coaxed plants from one state into another before, quickening them through the life stages. But she’d never brought a thoroughly dead plant back to life. The same crown of drive vines had been used every year for the Spring Maiden since she’d first seen the ceremony as a child.
It was thoroughly dried out. There was no hope of reviving it, even if it was allowed to sit in water for several days. There was nothing left of it.
How had she brought it back to life?
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2020 4:52 pm
by Nessa Saelind
@Taethowen - instead of writing an essay and telling you how much I loved this snippet you posted I'm just going to say that I'd preorder your book in a heartbeat, so type faster! :D Otherwise, no pressure.

Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2020 8:02 pm
by Taethowen
@Nessa Saelind *blushes* aw, thanks!
We're creeping up on the halfway point! How's everyone doing? Not just with your writing, but how are you doing? NaNo's a bit of a marathon and it can take a toll!
I managed to cross the 15k mark yesterday, and while I'd like to pull out another 3,000 words today, I'm just not sure it will happen. My brain is tired!
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2020 10:10 pm
by Eldrith
I am lingering around 10 000 but I should have more time coming up unexpectedly before the end of the month and tomorrow.
Here's a current snippet:
In one instant everything Benedict Coil was thinking fled from his mind. Something small pressed into the small of his back aimed upward, not quite penetrating his tunic to the skin, but he could feel it's sharpness and the grim insistence. Around them, the world flowed by. Housewives with baskets. A dog ambling and scratching at fleas. A gaggle of boys in hot pursuit of what seemed to be a small leather ball they were all trying to kick. Because of the proximity of the bodies, the implement would remain unseen to others, and the voice would flow into ear... quietly, calmly... but the tone of it was unmistakable.
"I'm not used to gaining the attention of many, friend. So, we could play the games and you can try to pretend innocence or you can tell me just what draws your attentions to my coming and going. " The man behind him, Conrad, it had to be Conrad, sounded almost pleasant.* "I am counting on you having common sense and choosing the latter."
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2020 8:33 am
by Elenhir
Snippet:
Bevthoutsa, Captain of the Twelve Dozen, Sheathed Blade at the Emperor's Side, took slow and steady steps along the entry path. She was armored in wide links of ceremonial bronze, with a too-wide bronze helm upon her head. Her Krixian face was narrow even by a Davh woman's standard, and the helm had been made when the Oak was young, and for a man besides. Like the throne, it was an ugly thing of twining roots, wrapping around from the back of the helmet to act as nose-bridge, cheek-guards, and frames about her eyes. Those, normally sunken, retreated fully into the shadows beneath the roots. When she wore the helm on the moonless nights of the harvest feast, she roamed about as if a headless spirit out of the old stories of the small gods, and the children ran from her with mad shrieks. But now Vael-in-his-Chains was strong in the sky, so she looked only mismatched, ill-tempered, and as a mess of shifting half-shadows. She carried the Ironwood Spear, and that was death. Bevthoutsa, the Demon Foundling of Tyvvos, walked slowly, but through each step the butt of that spear clacked against the pavestones and was a soft shudder to his heart.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Sat Nov 14, 2020 7:01 am
by Fuin Elda
Ohhh I really like that Elenhir! I hope to be able to read more of that, I devoured that snippet far faster than I have read a lot of other snippets and I want more.
I did not get my 25000 which I wanted to do yesterday but I am still on count at least. However I am ALMOST done the boring part of the nano I'm writing and will be getting back to fantastic violence once again which I tend to tear through so damn fast.
This is my little snippet from my nano today:
“Unless you have more than one human on your ship. Yes.” She said a bit of her ire and sass coming out and Keelan looked at her shocked at how they spoke to the Head of the Ship. They would never have thought to speak to the head of the ship like that. Apparently the Head of the ship didn't expect that either and they sat quietly for several minutes unsure of how to respond.
Right before this the Head of the Ship may have insulted her accidentally so she went full sass.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Sat Nov 14, 2020 5:32 pm
by Taethowen
@Eldrith - oooh, intriguing little snippet! Hope everything is lining up for you to have that writing time!
@Elenhir - I love all the imagery you use here! So atmospheric.
@Fuin Elda - well, even if you're not at 25k yet, you're technically still ahead! And yay for sass!
Ugh, my story has stopped cooperating. I've had this problem each time I've tried to work on this particular story (this is the 3rd attempt) and I just... don't know that I have the energy to deal with it at all right now. I had hoped since I'd set it aside for 2 years, I would be able to work on it afresh and figure out where/why things keep going off track, but I just haven't. Unfortunately, I think I need to set this particular story aside indefinitely.
The good news is that I have several other not-quite-finished projects I can pick up for NaNo, and hopefully I'll be able to get plenty of words out of them to reach 50k.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2020 3:47 am
by Eldrith
"The walk to the keep was not a long one. Autumn was clawing it’s way through the hide of summer and the chill started to creep through his cloak as well as he made his way from the village to the keep in that knowledge. A change of the life he’d known for well over a decade. Conrad was not a hearty man but he’d warned the guards of his arrival. It wasn’t as if they questioned everyone who came in. The keep saw a lively trade and many were in and out at all times as he had observed. But somehow word was given because as soon as he entered the gate a man came to greet him. No, not a man. A knight. Ben stared, the first time he met one, and word was true. They were.. Different. The fact that he was close to seven feet if not more was a start, but it didn’t say all. The man was.. More. He could feel it, like a ripple across his mind. Different. Not like just a man. And he had met one alike before. He stood there, right on that courtyard, frozen to it’s cobbles and staring. "
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2020 11:54 am
by Nessa Saelind
@Taethowen - Oh, I'm really sorry that to hear that. It's a bit heartbreaking when you pour so much time, skill and energy into a text and the thing keeps fighting back and not working no matter what you do.

I hope you're OK, and that you found something else to work on. BTW if you'd like some help in kicking some senses into that stuborn story I'd be more than happy to help kick it. Or something
@Elenhir - Hi, sorry, excuse me... When can I throw money at you to preorder that book?
@Eldrith - oh, this last snippet is awesome! You got me hooked and I was grumbling at the end why you didn't post more of it!
@Fuin Elda - I'd like to see your boring bits of text too! :-) The extracts with dialogue and action you shared are great, but I like "boring" bits too. :-)
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2020 6:52 am
by Fuin Elda
@Nessa Saelind I haven't been posting my boring text overly because I don't like it it hasn't been 'right' story wise it's been me slogging to get through it for the moment which is why I haven't overly shared any of it. However this portion I quite liked so am sharing. This is getting towards the end of my boring text and has been sitting in my head for the last little bit. There is probably another 2K words of boring before I start getting actiony again which is where word soup starts disappearing as I tend to do adventure and dialogue better than I do what I'm writing right now.
[quote]
When she came to the airlock she looked at Keelan one last time, dread settling in her bones. Something was wrong but she didn't know what.
“Please make sure they don't leave me behind.” She said softly once more and Keelan nodded.
“You've my word, that we will not leave you behind but please return quickly.” They said and she gave a smile and slipped out of the elven ship back into the now freezing hull of the Apollo.[/qupte]
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2020 6:20 pm
by Nessa Saelind
@Fuin Elda - I know you know this, but don't worry if the "boring" bits don't work now. They'll be revised and edited and polished in due time. :-) My friend always tells me to keep writing, keep typing, you'll revise and edit when you're done. :-)
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2020 1:49 am
by Fuin Elda
@Nessa Saelind Honestly this story is probably going to get cut down to about 20K total from 50K if I bother at all. The first story I wrote in 2006 is currently getting edited and rewritten to become graphic novel/web comic instead. It's taking absolutely forever though but not terribly shocked as it's not just editing and drawing/digitizing everything
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2020 3:25 am
by Taethowen
@Nessa Saelind I do have an alternate project that I've picked up instead, and it's going MUCH smoother!
Last year, I wrote a fantasy novella that was published in an anthology. It was set in a story universe I've been playing with for almost a decade now, and I knew before I'd even finished the novella that I wanted to delve deeper into the characters within it and see how their story began/played out. Last NaNo, I actually wrote a bunch of supplemental scenes, and started working toward a conclusion that would tie the story in with the first novel (which has already been drafted once, but needs revision still).
I'm really enjoying visiting this world/character/story again, honestly. I probably should have done this project from the start, and as I'm merging scenes/plot lines and polishing it up, I'm so excited for its potential. The NaNo experience changed drastically this year as soon as I switched projects. Instead of dreading writing, I'm already trying to figure out how to make more writing time just to play in this world more.
So, now that I've gushed about it, enjoy the beginning few paragraphs (heads up, though, the story starts off with a plague, which I'D FORGOTTEN ABOUT UNTIL I READ IT THE OTHER DAY):
Chapter 1 – The Plagues
The Eleventh of Kasna in the year 3761 by Kashtophim Reckoning
The House of Taph was one of the lesser noble houses of Sconnela. While it was once a prestigious house in ages past, they were now only known for providing sacrifices for the mountain gods. It had been many years—not in Rillaph’s lifetime, nor even her parents—since they’d been called on for that particular duty, and so they mostly just happened to be of noble blood, and had managed to maintain their hold on the family lands and wealth, despite having little service to offer the Highest Ones.
Not that it mattered anymore.
All of the servants departed days before, when Rillaph’s parents fell ill. Even her old, loyal nursemaid left, and that farewell was the most upsetting for Rillaph. At least, before the nursemaid left, she’d shown Rillaph how to cook a few basic meals, and written down instructions for tending to her parents, how to keep them comfortable.
The only person she’d seen in days who wasn’t ill or an infant—because her brother was barely two years old and somehow the two of them had managed not to fall ill so far—was the plague marshal appointed to their section of the city. This was the second wave of this particular plague to sweep through the mountain kingdom of Sconnela. The first wiped out only the oldest and frailest in the country, and Sconnela as a whole hadn’t realized the illness was a serious issue until it returned over the winter and began affecting
all, working its way down from the old and the weak to the… not so old. The not so weak.
By the time the Highest Ones had any sort of counteractive measures in place, the plague had wreaked havoc on the noble houses.
Rillaph was still reeling in shock.
Re: NaNoWriMo Plaza Style - SO IT BEGINS!
Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2020 10:23 pm
by Nessa Saelind
@Taethowen - I won't say that this reminds me of certain politicians (who shall remain unnamed) and their response to COVID, but I won't deny it either
